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Ayatsuri Clan

Post by Kasi on Sat Jun 08, 2013 1:37 am

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Name: Ayatsuri

Affiliation: Sunagakure

Description: The Ayatsuri clan has been a part of Sunagakure for as long as anyone can remember. The clan was not especially good at any particular activity, up until the time of Monzaemon Chikamatsu. The whole family was enamored by his workings. Over time, the clan slowly integrated the puppetry arts into their culture. Now, they stand as some of the only puppeteers in the world, though they are rather widespread, scattered among the different nations.

Family Head: None

Known Members


Kekkei Genkai

Name: Puppetry
Field: Bukijutsu
Class: Multipurpose (Offensive, Defensive and Supplementary)
Range: N/A
Description: This is a fairly widespread technique with its heart in Sunagakure. The actual skill is based around the creation of chakra strings. The threads are made from very concentrated chakra and give off a light glow when not suppressed. The strings can be completely manipulated by the user's, and can even be used to channel chakra and jutsu through. The main purpose of these threads is to manipulate puppets, generally human-shaped constructs that can be built to serve a multitude of purposes, ranging from offense to entertainment. The strings allow for the complete manipulation of the puppets, or other objects they are connected to. The strings may also connect to a willing or deceased human to allow them to channel the user's jutsu.
Perquisites: It requires more strings the less experienced you are. At the very extreme minimum, one string can be used to control 100 puppets.
Chakra Cost: -2 per post, per puppet controlled

Perks

Cheat Out
Due to relying on puppets, members of this clan are fairly untrained in up close combat, but are very good at running while facing their opponent.
Bonus: Able to skillfully run backwards away from a visible adversary.
Consequence(s): Not able to learn any Taijutsu above C-Rank.

Jutsu
[center]Technique: Puppet Sealing
Field: Fuinjutsu
Class: Supplementary
Hand Seals: None
Duration: Until it is released
Cooldown: 2 posts
Drawbacks: Requires concentration and a scroll.
Chakra Cost: -10 chakra when sealing or releasing.
Description: Puppeteers do not always have room on their body to carry their puppet around with them. Some puppeteers choose to seal their puppet into a scroll for fast access and an easier load to carry.

Weapons
Type: Puppet
User: Ayatsuri Clan
Size: 6' tall, 1.5' shoulder and hip width
Weight: 40 lbs
Appearance: The weapon looks like a slightly above average-sized humanoid with ball joints. The head has no features. The entire figure just looks like an over-sized art mannequin.
Chakra Flow: Yes, given there are chakra strings.
Nature: None.
Description: This puppet is very basic and is simply used in training, or before a member of the clan has made their own personal puppet, or gotten a puppet from another person. There is a simple kunai or senbon shooter - that can store 20 of either weapon - in the right hand of the puppet and in the other hand is a retractable, spring-loaded 3" blade, but besides the basic rigging, the entire puppet is just a wooden humanoid figure.
Drawback/Duration/Cooldown: Requires Puppetry




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Re: Ayatsuri Clan

Post by Shizue Uchiha on Sat Jun 08, 2013 1:57 am

- You may want to create a basic jutsu template for a D-rank Puppet that every clansman is able to start with (since they're at somewhat of a disadvantage without one)
- Instead of Clansmen being unable to use any Taijutsu, you should instead limit their Taijutsu to a maximum of C-rank. Taijutsu refers to hand-to-hand combat/techniques that require training and they are essential to shinobi.

Beyond that, I think you're in good shape. Let me know when you've edited your app.

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Re: Ayatsuri Clan

Post by Shizue Uchiha on Sat Jun 08, 2013 3:17 am

You may want to add a retractable blade to the Weapon, and limit the number of shuriken/senbon per thread. That way it cannot spam projectiles.

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    - Shizue has completed 2 official missions in total: 0 D-rank, 1 C-rank, 1 B-rank, 0 A-rank, 0 S-rank.
    - Shizue's favourite phrase is "It is best to win without fighting." (それは戦うことなく勝つために最善の方法です, Sore wa tatakau koto naku katsu tame ni saizen no hōhōdesu.) and Shizue’s favourite word is "family" (家族, kazoku).
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Re: Ayatsuri Clan

Post by Kasi on Sat Jun 08, 2013 5:11 am

I added the limit, but I've decided against a retractable blade. This is just supposed to be a training puppet, nothing very special. It only has the launchers to practice with mechanisms. It isn't technically supposed to be used in actual combat.

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Re: Ayatsuri Clan

Post by Shizue Uchiha on Sat Jun 08, 2013 6:37 pm

Being that it's a clan for all members to join, then its most basic technique, being that puppet, should be one that can be relied upon while out on the field of duty. It doesn't have to be retractable, but, an arm-blade would be useful if the shinobi is up against a real opponent.

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    - Shizue’s hobbies are deep-sea diving and reading about the history of the Hidden Leaf.  
    - Shizue wishes to fight Kazuma Uchiha.
    - Shizue’s favorite foods are clam and tea dumplings. His least favourite is radish.
    - Shizue has completed 2 official missions in total: 0 D-rank, 1 C-rank, 1 B-rank, 0 A-rank, 0 S-rank.
    - Shizue's favourite phrase is "It is best to win without fighting." (それは戦うことなく勝つために最善の方法です, Sore wa tatakau koto naku katsu tame ni saizen no hōhōdesu.) and Shizue’s favourite word is "family" (家族, kazoku).
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Re: Ayatsuri Clan

Post by Kasi on Sun Jun 09, 2013 4:45 pm

Alright, I made slight edits. It should be acceptable.

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Re: Ayatsuri Clan

Post by Shizue Uchiha on Sun Jun 09, 2013 11:32 pm

This clan application is officially...

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    - Shizue’s hobbies are deep-sea diving and reading about the history of the Hidden Leaf.  
    - Shizue wishes to fight Kazuma Uchiha.
    - Shizue’s favorite foods are clam and tea dumplings. His least favourite is radish.
    - Shizue has completed 2 official missions in total: 0 D-rank, 1 C-rank, 1 B-rank, 0 A-rank, 0 S-rank.
    - Shizue's favourite phrase is "It is best to win without fighting." (それは戦うことなく勝つために最善の方法です, Sore wa tatakau koto naku katsu tame ni saizen no hōhōdesu.) and Shizue’s favourite word is "family" (家族, kazoku).
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